Post by Zephyr, from other site.Ok, Ive moved this to the correct forum, as the one you posted it in is for staff to talk about others new charries in privet.
Now, to assess the character.
You have not used the correct form, the correct form is in here.
So you should have had this form
Candidate FormName: Age in Turns: Note: Candidates are 12-20 for males and 14-22 for females.
Appearance:
Personality:
Pets:
Background:
What you wish to Impress:But because you have an "instant rider" by defalt, it would be modified to this
Rider FormName: Age in Turns: Note: Riders are 14+ for males and 16+ for females, with Jr WW being at least 20.
Appearance:
Personality:
Pets:
Background:With the Dragon Form added.
Name: (must end in Th)
Age in Turns: (dragons mature at 18months to 2 turns old)
Color: (besides a few I have approved, no instant Queen or Bronze ranks, please)
Personality: (please keep with the theam of the breed personality, found in the library)
Identifiable marks: (splotches, scores, markings, headknobs ext)
And for what you have written thus far. - Quote :
- Character name: Rose Light
On Pern, only Traders have surnames, and they are the names of their caravan.
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- Gender: Female
I actually forgot to put this in the forms, so thanks for adding it!
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- when she flying/fighting.
and
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- Fighting clothe: http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:U8K1cRn-1AoqRM:https://2img.net/h/i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd162/zeldarell/Female%20Anime/Warrior.jpg&t=1
Riders do not "fight" in a traditional sense, their dragons "fight" the thread that falls from the sky by breathing fire on it, but thread is mindless and does not attack back. Dragons and Dragonriders never attack each other.
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- Normal/street clothes:Pink t-shirt with blue jeans and jacket.
1) Dragonriders almost always ware their riding gear
2) there is no T-shirts or denim on Pern.
This is the typical Riding gear for dragon riders:
And typical casual gear:
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- She can get a bit defensive if teased about being a bit different from an average humans.
Dragonriders are the most respected people on the planet and have big dragons who can eat bullies. And as Junior WW, she is one of the most respected Dragonriders out there.
Post by Zephyr, from other site.