Re: Weyrleader Z'ek (Zeek)- Approved

Jr Weyrwoman Posts : 79 Join date : 2010-08-15 Age : 36

LightningRip wrote:: Age in Turns: 25 turns
Appearance: Athletic and strong, but he doesn't have bulging muscles or anything. He has short black hair and has a mysterious claw scar down the right side of his face; startign at his forhead and ending on his chin. He is very handsome, despite his scar. He is about 6' tall, but is very slim and lean. He is very fast and a quick reactor.
Personality: He is very calm and kind, and a quick thinker. He is quite smart, but he tends to keep to himself about his own feelings. That is the only thing he is shy about though, and he is always there to comfort you if needed. He also will not put up with cruel treatment, in anyway, to anything. He may be shy on the inside, but when it is required, Zeek is outgoing and brave.
Pets: A runner named Souldew. He is a midnight black stallion white socks and a star on his forehead. His mane and tail are also bleach white.
Rank: Weyrleader
Background: Zeek's life was very simple until time to impress. He is holdbred and helped his parents grow for the hold until he was old enough to try to impress. His parents are very old, and sadly he sees them very little, though they are in his heart. Zeek had not evena dream he would impress a Bronze. However, he somehow did and wound up with his dragon, Zenath, mating with the JWW's dragon. The four then left from the crumbling Weyr and started their own.

Name: Zenath
Age in Turns: 9
Color: Bronze
Personality: Like most Bronzes, Zenath is somewhat vain, though only when it comes to leadership. He does not want to follow rules unless they are his, so it's a good thing he is WL. He is quick and strong, so he can catch up to the WW dragon, and he is somewhat on the slender side, so he can manuever a little bit more than other Bronzes, though he still has compeition with the other smaller dragons.
Identifiable marks: Zenath has one large shiny silver scale on his forehead that stands out from the others greatly.

Jr Weyrwoman Posts : 79 Join date : 2010-08-15 Age : 36

ZephyrDrake wrote:

LightningRip wrote:: Age in Turns: 25
Appearance: Athletic and strong, but he doesn't have bulging muscles or anything. He has short black hair and has a mysterious claw scar down the right side of his face; startign at his forhead and ending on his chin. He is very handsome, despite his scar. He is about 6' tall, but is very slim and lean. He is very fast and a quick reactor.
Personality: He is very calm and kind, and a quick thinker. He is quite smart, but he tends to keep to himself about his own feelings. That is the only thing he is shy about though, and he is always there to comfort you if needed. He also will not put up with cruel treatment, in anyway, to anything. He may be shy on the inside, but when it is required, Zenath is outgoing and brave.
Pets: A horse named Souldew. She is pitch black with a white sock on her back right leg and a star on her forehead. her mane and tail are also white.
Rank: Weyrleader
Background: Zenath had a simpl life growing up. He is hold-born and helped his parents grow for the hold until he was old enough to become Weyrleader. His parents are very old,and sadly he sees them very little, though they are in his heart.

Ok, first youve forgotten the dragon. Seccond, you cant just become weyrleader. He would have been serched between the ages of 12 and 20, and trained as a candiadte for between 1 and 12 months. He would be standing for impression at every hatching until he impressed. He would then train as a weyrling anyware upwards from 6 months, depending on how long it takes him to pass the test. His dragon would not mature until 2 turns after it hatched, then he would be an offical rider and be drafted into a wing.

If he let his dragon fly every queen, he would have eventualy sired his first clutch within 2-3 Turns and would then have a chance of catching the senior queen. But my queen was a junior WW's Queen, just as choosey but a little easyer to catch. After flying Essiath, our characters for a bond and decide to found a new weyr to replace the crumbling Igen weyr that we were living in. And as your dragon was the last to catch the new Senior Queen, you were by defalt Weyrleader.

Now nitpicking.

We call Horses Runners on Pern.
You forgot the 'e' on the end of Simple in your background.
Its not 'hold-born', its 'holdbred'.

Jr Weyrwoman Posts : 79 Join date : 2010-08-15 Age : 36

ZephyrDrake wrote:: Aproved!

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