Alpha Wingleader Triston and Sunfire Bronze Taziath

Staff Form
Name: Triston
Age in Turns: 20
Appearance: Short but strong, Triston has very light blue eyes ad short blonde hair shaved close to the skin, but where you can just barely see it.
Personality: Cheerful and lighthearted, Triston is caring and scompassinoate. Some say he has to soft a heart, and too much so to be in charge of the Alpha Wing, but he is actually a very wise and good leader becaus eof it. He doesn't hesitate to punish rule-breakers, but he is always considerate and thoughtful and knows what punishment to give. H eis extremely loyal to Cobalt Weyr, but he also cares deeply for his dragon and friends.
Pets: Gold runner mare named Sunshine, and a male White Feline named Frosty.
Background: Like many others, Triston followed Alana and Z'ek to Cobalt Weyr. He then moved his way up the newly started Weyr and became Alpha Wingleader.
What you want then to be/do: Alpha Wing's Wingleader

Dragon Form
Name: Taziath
Age in Turns: 4
Color: Bronze
Personality: Extremely protective of Triston, Taziath is a very spunky young dragon. He fawns over females, especially Queens, and is somewhat of a show-off. However he is a very wise leader, and takes great care of his wing.
Identifiable marks: Really, really dark splotch on the underside of his right wing.

It is rare for a brown to be the wingleader of the Alpha wing, so I'd personaly sugest a Bronze, champagne or Ivory.

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